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Quote from b.andrewkelly on June 26, 2020, 3:21 am
Quote from Karthik Nair on June 15, 2020, 10:23 am

If anyone even reads the one I wrote " Solitary Confinement" I will be grateful to know what you thought of it.. 🙂

i liked how you used the imagery of a prison. at first it seemed there was not much imagery in the poem, but then i realized the fact you used a prison cell as a frame of reference suits that really well. one thing i wasnt super crazy about was the use of the word hogwash. it just came off as somewhat awkward, but other than that i absolutely loved it!

Thanks a lot and I know I shouldn't have used that word but thank you for pointing that out and I know I am bad at using imagery most of what I write seems too direct instead of creative so thank you again for your comments they mean a lot 🙇🏿‍♂️🙇🏿‍♂️

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